Post by Paradox on Aug 1, 2008 17:35:29 GMT -5
Just a note before we begin: THIS IS COPYRIGHT, SO NO STEALING!!!! I'm paranoid about my work being stolen, no matter how awful it is...
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Angela Smith (a very normal girl, by the way) was walking down the street when she was nearly blinded by a mysterious radiance. It shone forth from a drop-dead gorgeous girl who flew above the street using the white-feathered wings she just happened to have. When she saw Angela she dropped gracefully down onto the sidewalk.
“Hello, stranger. Did I startle you?” the girl asked, flipping her so-blond-it’s-almost-white hair. Her turquoise eyes stared at Angela knowingly. Angela didn’t answer. She was still staring at the girl, who was wearing something that looked like it came right out of an anime. In her right hand was an extremely heavy and somehow cute weapon. She was able to hold this and still keep her balance perfectly.
“Well, if you are confused as to why I am here, it is because I am on a quest to develop my one-of-a-kind power of incomparable destruction, defeat the evil Lord Gondolpavyaov, and find the magical Jewel of Helioparaluna to save my people from destruction. I know, I know, it’s soooo easy, but I have to start somewhere.”
Angela lifted an eyebrow. Angela felt strangely like she’d seen this girl somewhere before. “What’s your name?”
“Oh, I’m Naiw'upatara Zanda La Fwaren III the Warrior Princess of Udalpa'ilabek'kia, but you can call me Nai.”
“Oh, um… Nai. Does your name by any chance translate from your language to English as Mary Sue?” asked Angela.
“Oh yes! How did you know?”[/color]
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The Return of Naiw'upatara Zanda La Fwaren III the Warrior Princess of Udalpa'ilabek'kia
By Paradox
By Paradox
Angela Smith (a very normal girl, by the way) was walking down the street when she was nearly blinded by a mysterious radiance. It shone forth from a drop-dead gorgeous girl who flew above the street using the white-feathered wings she just happened to have. When she saw Angela she dropped gracefully down onto the sidewalk.
“Hello, stranger. Did I startle you?” the girl asked, flipping her so-blond-it’s-almost-white hair. Her turquoise eyes stared at Angela knowingly. Angela didn’t answer. She was still staring at the girl, who was wearing something that looked like it came right out of an anime. In her right hand was an extremely heavy and somehow cute weapon. She was able to hold this and still keep her balance perfectly.
“Well, if you are confused as to why I am here, it is because I am on a quest to develop my one-of-a-kind power of incomparable destruction, defeat the evil Lord Gondolpavyaov, and find the magical Jewel of Helioparaluna to save my people from destruction. I know, I know, it’s soooo easy, but I have to start somewhere.”
Angela lifted an eyebrow. Angela felt strangely like she’d seen this girl somewhere before. “What’s your name?”
“Oh, I’m Naiw'upatara Zanda La Fwaren III the Warrior Princess of Udalpa'ilabek'kia, but you can call me Nai.”
“Oh, um… Nai. Does your name by any chance translate from your language to English as Mary Sue?” asked Angela.
“Oh yes! How did you know?”[/color]
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