Rate it 1-5

[englandtshirt]

These are 2 of my friends poems. I told they are good (they are in my opinion) but she doesnt act like she belives me.
Rate them 1 through 5!
Thanks!

Hate
i hate her
thats all i can say
like friendship that she betrayed
and the lies that she spun up
and all the times that shes hung up
shes never listened to what i have to say
but it doesn't matter anyway
because now i know
that she doesn't show
what she knows
or doesn't even care

-Britta



Lies
I'm tried of lying
and saying "I'm fine"
but I'm not
I'm hurt...
from the way you look at her
and the way you say "i love you"
makes me wanna cry
and never want to say good bye

Britta






Tell me whacha think!

[hilary]

I would rate the first one a 5 (I'm going to share it w/my sister because she can really relate to that poem)

I would rate the seconf one a 4, I think lines 4 and 5 don't flow but thats just my opinoin.

[englandtshirt]

Sept 24, 2008 7:15:24 GMT -5 hilary said:

I would rate the first one a 5 (I'm going to share it w/my sister because she can really relate to that poem)

I would rate the seconf one a 4, I think lines 4 and 5 don't flow but thats just my opinoin.

i agree with the last part.

Thanks for rating!

[englandtshirt]

my friend told me that one of her poems is being published!

it this:
I sat on a hat!
And it ran away!
So then i fell.
so there i sat
wondering where that hat spent his day.
so then i followed
and then found
that big black hat, under the ground!
i pushed
i pulled
but to my surprise
that the big black hat was indeed a big black furry rat
-Britta

she kinda just made it for fun,
so yeah
shes happy!

[chicklike]

ah congrats to her! haha.