The Life Of Persnicketi

[Kendra]

WARNING: Cuss Words!
This is a story I started back in early '08 and I decided to get off my lazy arse and write more =D
The chapters are short so I'll post 4 at a time.

Part 1: Self Typing About Self
Persnicketi: Ugggh...this typing program is shit...SHIT SHIT SHIT! UGGGH. (Typing) My name is Persnicketi Martinez. My real name is Persha Kaye though. I'm Spanish, have black hair, and a big-ass forehead. I cuss quite alot, usually not for offensives, but you get the idea. It's fun as hell. >:] I have (counts) 4 piercing and I like to..
(Stopped Short By Mom)
Mom: Pershaaa! Get off that thing and go to bed!
Brother: Yeah! You heard mom!
Persnicketi: Terrin you dumb punta, you should be in bed too!
Terrin: I don't have school tomorrow! Haha in YO FACE.
Persnicketi: (To Self) I'd rip that shitty mask OFF your face..
Mom: What did you say?
Persnicketi: Nothing! I'm sorry Terrin..
Terrin: It's okay...? Mom, she's acting weird.
Mom: Probably a phase. Anyway, Persha get some rest! It's 12:30 in the morning!
Persnicketi: Okay fine. Good night!
Mom: Good night!

Part 2: Daniel
Persnicketi: UGGH...what's with this fucking HUGE flight of stairs? No one needs the mother fucking stairs to get into school! A leveled out pavement would have been fine. But NO this school always has to go for the FANCY shit. (She Rolls Her Eyes Then Trips And Falls) Ahh!
(Someone Helps Her Up)
Person: Are you okay?
Persnicketi: (Gasp) She stares into his eyes.. (Replying Back) Yeah...I guess...if you don't mind me asking, what's you're name?
Person: Daniel. Daniel Sierra--
(Stopped Short By Persnicketi)
Persnicketi: Your middle name is Sierra?!
Daniel: No! It's Jacob...but anyway...what's your name?
Persnicketi: Persha Kaye...but call me Persnicketi please...spelled with an 'i' at the end ^_^
Daniel: That's cute...it really suits you...
Persnicketi: The persnickety part or the cute part?
Daniel: The cute part of course :] (He Kisses Her Then Goes Inside The School)
Persnicketi: Wow...(Then The School Bell Rings) AWW SHIT I'm late for class again!
(She Storms Inside The School)

Part 3: Choosing Sides
Persnicketi: I'm late for class but I don't care...(She Smiles) Lalala...
Tekirra: You seem so happy today...uh, why?
Persnicketi: Because I fell on the stairs...
Tekirra: What the hell is so good about that?
Persnicketi: Then this cute guy helped me up...
Tekirra: Ohh...what's his name?...
Persnicketi: Daniel Sierra! (She Smiles Cheesily)
Tekirra: Oh, I hate him...(She Blows A Raspberrry)
Persnicketi: Kirra, how can you possibly hate someone that adorable?
Tekirra: Because he broke up with me last week...he's a jerk! (She Smiles)
Persnicketi: Well...he seems really nice to me...
Tekirra: That’s what he wants you to think...
Persnicketi: Well...I like him...and...I think I'm going to ask him to be my boyfriend.
Tekirra: You're gonna ask out some bitch you hardly even know?
Persnicketi: Okay, ONE...that 'bitch' is an awesome guy...I just know it. And TWO, I can get to know him.
Tekirra: Eh. Whatever...just watch, I'm right. (She Storms Off)
Persnicketi: Dramatic little...UGGH! (She Storms Off To Class)

Part 4: He's Stuck In My Head
Teacher: Okay, now who can answer this equation that’s on the board? How about you Persnicketi?
(Persnicketi Is Doodling 'Persnicketi Kaye Sierra<3' On Her Notebook)
Teacher: Persnicketi...Persha Kaye Martinez!
Persnicketi: WHAT?
Teacher: Answer this equation that’s on the board...
Persnicketi: Oh! I know this...um...you add the Sierra with the Martinez?
(The Class Laughs)
Teacher: (She Sighs) No Persnicketi...that's not it. What's wrong? You're my best student!
Persnicketi: I've just got stuff on my mind...plus I suck at this class...
Teacher: No, the students AROUND you suck at this class...I mean...ya'll ain't heard that...(She Stuffs A Pretzel In Her Mouth)
Persnicketi: Thanks for the encouraging words Ms...um...
Teacher: Cierra.
Persnicketi: OHHH I love that name!
(The Bell Rings)
Persnicketi: Bye!

[Tafara]

ooh this is good, it' more of a screenplay. The main character has a strong personality =D

[blondie]

I like it, the only thing I would make a suggestion on, is to change the timing of the kiss. It seems like it's rushed. ^-^

[Jedi Kay]

I like it.
The kiss came kinda early though. D:<
Jk. But seriously, the kiss was really early.

[Kendra]

Now that I think about it.. it really did >_< Gahh.
Here's more of the story anyway:

Part 5: He Just Loves Me
(Persnicketi Is Walking Home)
Daniel: Persnicketi!
Persnicketi: Daniel...(Sigh) Hi...(She Giggles)
Daniel: Hey, um...I just wanted to give you something...
Persnicketi: Okay sure...what is it?
Daniel: (He Gives Her A Present)
Persnicketi: Oooh...
Daniel: Open it! (He Smiles)
Persnicketi: (She Opens The Gift And Is Uplifted) I locket...I love it...it's all crystalizeedizedized...
Daniel: I know this seems a little fast but...
Persnicketi: It's not. It's perfect speed. (She Kisses Him Then Walks Home)

Part 6: Yes, I Can Ask Him
Persnicketi: (She Walks In Through The Door) Hey mom, did you ever have a boyfriend at my age?
Mother: A boyfriend at 12...yes, I think I had 2 at that age. Why, is there a boy that you like? (She Grins)
Persnicketi: (She Sighs) Yes...his name is Daniel and he's totally perfect...he's cute, he's nice, he's smart, he's organized, he gave me this locket! (She Shows Her The Locket)
Mother: Oh, that's pretty...it's all big and crystaliziedizedized...
Persnicketi: That's what I said...anyways could I...
Mother: Be his girlfriend? Yes, he sounds great. Go for him!
Persnicketi: Yes! Thanks mom, mwach!
Mother: Mwach! Haha! (She Laughs)

Part 7: Gettin' Together
Persnicketi: Daniel...
Daniel: Persnicketi...
Both: You go first! Okay...on 3...
Persnicketi: One...
Daniel: Two...
Both: I'd really would like to be your girlfriend/boyfriend. Aww, you feel the same way!
(They Hug Each Other)
Persnicketi: (Whispering) I love you Daniel...
Daniel: (Whispering) I love you too Persnicketi...

Part 8: Jealousy Strikes Again
Persnicketi: Guess what happened this morning?
Tekirra: What. You and Daniel got all lovey dovey infront of the school and the teachers that were out there gave you tickets?
Persnicketi: No! Me and Daniel got together! Isn't that great?
Tekirra: (She Stomps On The Ground) Persha. Kaye. Martinez. DIDN'T I TELL YOU NOT TO ASK HIM OUT?!
Persnicketi: You're not my mother. YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHT TO TELL ME WHAT TO DO.
Tekirra: Well I do anyway!
Persnicketi: Yehh, but I don't listen 'cause all your rules SUCK.
Tekirra: No they DON'T!
Persnicketi: (She Slaps Tekirra) WHO ARE YOU TO JUDGE YOUR OWN SHIT? Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna leave your bossy ass alone so I can get to class on time. GOODBYE. (She Storms Off)
Tekirra: (Yelling) And be so FUCKING happy with Daniel! Have kids for all I care! (To Self) I want him back so bad...but I'll never get him back... (A Tear Rolls Down Her Cheek)

[chicklike]

This is good. x) I can't wait to read more.